Title - Troll Haired Insect
WALT: describe
Remember to:
- use looks, actions and characteristics
- use describing words
- similes and metaphors
- paragraphs (from planning sheet)
Have you ever seen an insect that looks like it has a crazy hairdo? Well I haven't but I know what it is, it is a troll haired insect. 
The Troll haired insect is 5 mm long
and its body is a gorgeous golden colour. It’s hair is made of wax though it looks like normal hair. It has six legs, 3 body parts and of course long waxey hair coming out of its body.
and its body is a gorgeous golden colour. It’s hair is made of wax though it looks like normal hair. It has six legs, 3 body parts and of course long waxey hair coming out of its body.
Scientists believe that they use their hairy wax to distract predators from eating them.
What a fascinating insect!
What a fascinating insect!
Great description Lizzy. I love how every sentence starts differently. It really does look like it has troll hair.
ReplyDeleteHi Lizzy,
ReplyDeleteI love your writing about the Troll! Do you know this much about another insect? I would be amazed if you knew this much information about bug's! I would love to learn more about this interesting insect, maybe next time you could write about an ant or even a spider. It look's like you have used everything you needed too from the success criteria, If I were your teacher I would score a 3P or a 3A that is how much you have impressed me! Can't wait to see more of your post! Come visit my blog here: http://hpscarleecehp.blogspot.co.nz/
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