Friday, 20 February 2015

Beach Writing


This is my writing about the beach, each subject is highlighted a different colour.


The hot sand burned my feet as I walked the down the peaceful beach making footprints. Footprints weaved around the sand castles on the beach. The waves smashed against the rocks as loud as a lions roar. The waves made little kids trip over. Dribble castles, high turrets, kids made castles in the burning sand.

The sky was as blue as a sky on a perfect summers day. Seagulls soared around it, screeching in the distance. An adult handed out helium balloons to a few kids having a party.Two of the helium balloons floated up to the sky as I heard a child cry.

The taste of watermelon swirled in my mouth as I took a bite out of a juicy piece of watermelon from the family picnic. “Yum” shouted my sister as she took a bite into her piece of watermelon.

The smell of sausages on the BBQ was dragging me back to the yummy family picnic.

Wednesday, 18 February 2015