This is my latest 100 WC writing...
The bark is as rough as the concrete in town. The leaves are as soft as the wool on a sheep. And the twigs are a sharp as the arrow that pierces through the rabbit’s silky fur. It looks like a gigantic broccoli, with a brown trunk. Or sometimes a simple stick figure with no legs, and arms going everywhere. Birds tweet in the tree tops and critters crawl up the trunks. They grow from the dark brown soil in the ground up to the bright blue sky.
Good use of similes. I love the images you have associated with the tree i.e giant broccoli and stick figures.
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